This is my new animatic with alternative camera angles and timings worked out. I got the timings down reasonably well in my original animatic, but as the camera angles didn't visually get across the kind of atmosphere I wanted to create I then went back and addressed this problem, hopefully to good effect.
I have left out the credits and the opening intro, Also their are parts in the skit which fade in and out of each scene, which I have represented with a solid black color, As this is something which can be put in once the timings and camera angles have been agreed upon.